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[Comic] Episode29.9 ECLIPSE EVE part3/3 by yuki-zakuro [Comic] Episode29.9 ECLIPSE EVE part3/3 by yuki-zakuro
This comic is derivative work of MLP.
This comic has 86 pages.
I made partition it into 3 parts.
part 1/3 : URL yuki-zakuro.deviantart.com/art…
part 2/3 : URL yuki-zakuro.deviantart.com/art…
part 3/3 : URL yuki-zakuro.deviantart.com/art…
The story describes the reason of sealing for thousand years.
And it tells Luna's sentiment and Celestia's passion.
But it is one of alternative idea and it has no relation to official.
And it includes discrepancy between story of 'Nightmare Rarity'.
That discrepancy is solved by other story written by me.
URL:www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
But it's still undecided whether to translate or not.
(I think it's really difficult to be translated.)

And I'm not good at English.
It was really hard for me to translate my comic.
I asked my friend to translate but she said 'I can't have confidence about my work, sorry'.
Please make sure it.
And have fun!

Thank you.


[Story description]

The night before 'Nightmare Night'.
This 'Nightmare Night' is the first time for Luna to join.
Luna was getting nervous about it.
Celestia asked to Luna to comfort her.
'Why don't we visit Ponyville and take a look before festival?'
Luna was confused but she agreed to visit.
On the other hand, Nightmare Moon was awaken behind Luna's shadow...
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:icondoughnutjoe:
DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015
This was really fantastic. I really liked the explanation for why Luna looked different. But since she absorbed Nightmare Moon and got a bit bigger, the clothing that Rarity made for her won't fit properly, right? :D
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for reading!
I am honored ^^
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:icongarend:
Garend Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Cool!
I like this comic.
May we see 28.1 English ver?
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Knightviper1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
That all tied together amazingly! I was wondering throughout about why you chose to give her the first look she had, but after seeing Princess Luna and Nightmare Moon join together like that, it not only made sense for this comic but for the show as well. I love the idea of it ^^
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please read my comics, Thank you.
I'm really happy with you enjoying^^
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Attemborough Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
What a wonderful comic!
I've read the Japanese version before however I could not read Japanese....
(I can just guess what happen)

You did a great job for the translation into English!
Thanks again for your awesome work.
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for reading me.
I'm glad to me willing to you.
It was good to be translated into English^^
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:iconattemborough:
Attemborough Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
You are quite welcome
I look forward to reading your other awesome comic about the beautiful royal pony sisters.

:)
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:iconinesbenabes:
inesbenabes Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this comic 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
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:iconinesbenabes:
inesbenabes Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
you are very welcome 
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monika41 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG  ONE OF THE BEST COMICS EVER 
umm...I..mean *cough cough*
the drawing style was pretty good, the story makes sense.though it could be better...LOL JOKE THIS IS AWESOME AND ITS GREAT TO SEE NIGHTMARE MOON ACCEPTS PEACE Huggle! Huggle! Huggle! Huggle! Giggle Giggle Love Love Love I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! I am a dummy! :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) Rabbit hole Buy My Prints Please Buy My Prints Please Bounce Banned! 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
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:iconmonika41:
monika41 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
thank you for this great comic C;
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:iconwindspeed8:
Windspeed8 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
OH WOW I never actually thought about how she got her mane to look all "night" like
Wonderful story!!! Love 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for reading
I am honored!
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:iconblewfire:
blewfire Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
That was one of the most awesome things I have ever read.  You balance both princess personalities so well.  The art was simply amazing too.
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the message!
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:iconlegendofmoriad:
legendofmoriad Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Well, I think I need to adjust my theory of events.  Well done, impressive art and writing.  
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Wow, that was some impressive storytelling. I really enoyed this comic, and it  is the best pre-Lunar Eclipse episode one can get.
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message
I am honored!
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:iconcommanderex:
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
Your welcome.

On side note, I wrote a fanfiction "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" where I tried to portrait Nightmare Moon diferent than in the show, more of a black knight character type. Considering that you made this comic that involve Luna and Nightmare Moon, you may like my work.

www.fimfiction.net/story/19710…

I know my version of Nightmare Moon may not be as good as yours, but hope it is at least close. If you decide to check it, have fun.
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:iconjd-jump:
JD-jump Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Artist
I loved it free Princess Luna icon 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your comment!
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:iconjd-jump:
JD-jump Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Artist
No problem its was awesome :D and I loved reading it
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samykhadre Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
It's beautiful !!Clap :squee: 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your comment!
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samykhadre Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014
^^
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AnaShadowWolf Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have no words, that whole comic was touching and incredibly beautiful!!!!
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your comment!
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Axis-of-Rotation Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
私は日本語を知らない
私はGoogle翻訳を使用しています

この漫画素晴らしいです私はそれを追加しました

誰も助けないでしょう変換するには? 英語に
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your comment!

ありがとうございます。
日本語のメッセージに感謝します!
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Axis-of-Rotation Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
^.^
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Shuusuke2 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
How at first only luna could see or hear Nightmare Moon's shadow and as she heard about the past from Celestia and her feelings conflicted more than before her power grew to the point where it could be seen and fight off celestia because it had feed off Luna's emotions got to me a Kingdom Hearts vibe with the power of theirs hearts being of such importance.
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yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message.
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MrKabbage Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
I loved this. The artwork is adorable and vibrant, and your style is really charming!

Your English was adequate! It got the idea across well enough.

Awesome work!
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yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
I am honored to you reading
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Petester34 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
This is a truly wonderful thing you have here. The art is beautiful, the story is excellent and the dialogue is amazing. Keep doing what you do and have fun.
Luna 50X50 (icon smaller) 
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
 I will keep trying my best.
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RDkinght Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed this comic.
:iconclapplz:
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yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Was sent here by :iconno-shining-knight:

This is certainly a different take on the Luna Eclipsed episode. Wondefully done! :)
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:iconyuki-zakuro:
yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the message!
I am very happy^^
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
:)
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Helsaabi Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
10/10 it's amazing story and real manga! <3 I have no word to say. 
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yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
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Helsaabi Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
You're welcome! ^^
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Gnorian Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Great read! You did a good job translating it and getting the emotion of your story across. The art is also highly excellent. This story was very touching, and speaks of a great direction the show could have gone in (not that I'm unhappy with the current direction, but I'd love an episode or two-parter like this).

I'll add this to my short list of favourites. I look forward to more of your work.
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yuki-zakuro Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your message!
I am honored to you reading
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